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Monday, July 16, 2012

The Devil&I Chapter 22

Helloo Guys How is your summer so far?

and Kl 3am w ento b5eer Ramadan is near el7amdallah

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This post is dedicated to @Amooneyi Thanks Alot!


Happy reading don't forget to Enjoy the chapter as much as you can!!


my uncle khalid: enti Ya mfhya we couldn't celebrate your birthday so manal said that we could bring a cake so she brought it

Manaal? tears filling my eyes Noo its not the right time to cry!

i held my tears back and thanked them all then i got to manal and


i Couldn't be mad at her i feel ashamed For what i did i Mean she's my best friend from along time and i missed her by not talking to her for One day only!!!


i Hugged her and tears started falling from my Eyes i hugged her tight and i was Surprised After what i Did to her she hugged me back and started wiping my tears
" Maa -aanaal * sobbing* i ii i'm soorry *sobbing * " i said while crying i was so ashamed

" Shhh 7beebti 5laa9 ma 9ar shy yallah its your birthday party enjoy it now " she said while Smiling

" i lovee you manal wallah " i said as i Smiled
"thats not it you have another surprise waiting for you" she Smiled

i started jumping from excitement "wshoo wshoo wshoo wshoo " i said waiting for the answer

she started jumping while saying " ma r7 agoolk ma r7 agoolk why is it called a surprise "she said

" yallah 3aad maanal" i said giving her a puppy face look

" its not here its in your house " she said sticking her tongue out

I ran to Tallal Hugged him so tight I was so sorry

" im sorry tallal wallah i don't know what has gotten into me im really sorry please forgive me"i said My eyes were teary ..

" don't worry i forgive you little sister please forgive me too" he smiled a weak smile

"akeed Tallal you did nothing i was wrong "I grinned

" go enjoy, its your night and it ain't done yet "He smiled

Manal helped me with my make up and
they sang happy birthday once again they gave me gifts i Adooree my family !

my uncle bought me This juicy track suit,my Grand father and Grandmother and aunt bought me this Lovely watch
What can I say I love them so much !
My family meant the world to me Seriously !
The rest of the night Was amazing !!!
it was About 1 o'clock


i Ran to my mother smiling 


Mom: akeed teb'3i shy 97 ma tbtsmeen 4a elebtsama ela lw b'3eeti shy she laughed


Me: Allah 3leek ya mama ya 7beebti 


Mom: esh teb'3een yalla gooli


Me: can i skip school tomorrow please please please please please please i kept repeating the word "please " as i smiled this annoying smile

Mom:bs zan 5la9 bs bkra b3dh troo7een

Me: shkran mama i lovee youu wallah i Smiled

i Ran to manal 

Me: manal Gooli l2omk t'3eebeen bkra bs bkra pleaase i made a puppy face

Manal: Eee gltlha mn gbl w galat 6yb 

Me: Ajal shrayek tjeen tnameen 3ndi

Manal: yeah i know i already asked my mom and she Agreed

Me: mashallah 8rrt elo5t 

Manal: Eee 3adi 

Me: it'll be fun Beside i have a surprise for you! I Said as i stared at Tallal which was staring at manal

Manal : umm Your full of surprises yourself 


So we went home Arrived home

Ahmad was there!!!!!!!!

i whispered to manal " oh so this is the surprise i love it " 


She said out loud " la Ahmad that's not the surprise he's part of it " 

Ahmad looked at me and laughed 

okay that was embarrassing !

i Looked at the ground 

then pinched manal 

" AAAAYY YA KALBA 3WRTEENI " She yelled

I Looked at her and gave her a death stare

My mom Came in so it was silent then she got up there waas something up tallal was coming up and down ahmad too 

Me And manal just sat there in the living room 

Then suddenly i felt someone covering my eyes it was more of a mans hand

i tried to get his hand of but it was too strong 

" Meen ana " he said his manly voice DAD!!!

" BABAAA " a smile was painted on my face

i turned around to see him i've missed him so much

i got my heels off and jumped to hug him from over the sofa

i hugged him Tightly" BABAA I MISSED YOU ALOT " I Said a tear of happiness came down my cheek 

baba: 7beebti enti ana akthr wallah keefk el7een enshallah a7sn He asked as he played with my hair 

me and my dad sat on the sofa everyone was gone wonder where they went

he played with my hair i felt like i was a little kid i loved that feeling

My dad puted his finger on my nose and made a beeb beeb noise 

i giggled " baabaa " i started laughing

"wsh feek ma y9eeer al3ab m3 my baby girl " he smiled

" im not a baby anymore "

" yeaah we'll see about that " he said as he laughed

then he held me up i was upside down


he started laughing "now your my baby girl" he laughed


"baabaa nazlni pleaase i laughed 
i was upside down then i saw someone approaching 
my dad was swinging 

Then i heard girls singing happy birthday

Thats when my dad putted me down and putted his hand around my shoulder


now i can see well OMG I CANT BELIEVE THIS it waass


Tallal, manal, ahmad, my mom , my twins , ABEER , SADEEM , RANEEM , GHADAH ANOUD , ALYA AND SULTAAN !!!


i wass surprised ohhh i lovee them !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its 1 am in thee morning i mean WOW Im speechless they had baloons a cake and gifts with them!!!

i just stood there looking stupid

when they were done i ran and hugged every single one of them!!!

Me: leesh k4a t3bto nfskm wallah i lovee you guys but its 1 o'clock in the morning !

raneem: 3adi 7beebt albi enti 

alya: shd3wa ma sweena shy you deserve better 

Me: aww i lovee you guys im speech less

sultaan: uhmm uhmm w ana mali rb he said as he crossed his hands

Me: hehehe la tz3l 5la9 im sorry i ran and hugged him a brotherly hug

but from the other side i saw Ahmad looking at me with a creepy look


okaay what did i do?


Ahmad came with a bag in his hand 


ahmad: here you go its a gift from me, tallal and manal!!!


i looked inside to find a brand new blackberry and a brand new iphone 


me: thank you thankk you thank you as i jumped wallah i love you guys alot !!


i hugged them all!


Mom:fy b3d hdaya mn elbnat t3ali 


i sat down and started unrapping  my gifts


dad: yalla 7beebti ana w omk bnroo7 foog lma t5l9een t3ali 3endi lk shy b3d!


I Nodded

ghadah :Eee ha ana 3la elsofa bnam

me: btnamoon b3d i smiled with excitement 

abeer: yeah of course girl !

Me: how about school?

all of them : we're skipping honeey and they started dancing 

i laughed at their silliness 

Sultan : yalla 3aad ift7i elhdaya as he handed me a gift 

i opened it it was A Swarovski  bracelet i loved it !!


Me: sultaaan thaankk you alott!!!!!!!


Sultan : ha how did you know its from me ? as he putted a question mark on his face


Me: daah you gave it to me just now i laughed 


Alya: fhawa zayda while laughing


Sultan : hehehe wsh aswi b3d ma54h mnk he teased


they all laughed 


i opened all the gifts 


its was the last one i opened it to find a kroot sh7n i laughed 


Ghadah i said as i pointed at her and laughed

Ghadah: 3shan tsh7ni elbbm as she made a shy face

we all laughed


oh noo i totally forgot about Dad!

i hurried to him knocked on the door 

" come in " he said from the other side

i got in and i found him sitting on bed my mother was next to him and he had a cartier bag in his hand

Me: hala yuba 

Dad: ta3aly 7beebti ejlsi

i sat beside
then he handed me the bag

Me: moom daad i lovee you guys wallah!!!

baba: yalla ift7eeh 

i opened it to find a beautiful bracelet 

 along with a beautiful ring!!!
 i lovee them so much !!

can this day get any better?

i hugged them and thanked them and went down !




i got down and saw them sitting looks like they're going to watch a movie!


me: ummm i smell movie right? 


Ahmad came and whispered : yes go get dressed beautiful your picking the movie 


i ran up got my pj's on and went down everyone waas wearing pj's already!


Me: ummm yallah im picking a movie so i'll pick horror 


sadeem: noo please i hate horror movies i get scared quickly she said with a sad face on


Sultan smiled to her and said: don't worry you won't i'll be here


i laughed


Tallal: kaaaaak wow your a hero mashallah 3leek!


Sadeem : eskt ent bs and she gave him a scary stare


Tallal laughed harder: hahahaha roo7i bs to your hero 


sultan and Sadeem were shy 


Tallal: kaaak esta7aw yallah bs tala i5tari movie


Raneem : ummm silent house ygooloon 7eloo


Ahmad: shfnaah baaye5


manal: la bl3ks 7eloo


tallal: elzbda shfnah shy thani


Me: cabin in the woods!!!

Abeer: yeaah i saw its trailer its nice i guess!

Anoud: ee yallah nshoofh 

they all agreed 

So it was like this

we were all sitting on the ground

Ahmad - me - raneem- ghadah - abeer-manal-tallal -anoud-  alya - sultan - sadeem


we all sat watching the movie every scary part we all the girls scream i always end up on ahmad's lap !


and Tallal ofcourse keeps complaining " dla3 wsh 4a el7amdallah w elshkr "


There was one scary part  none of us screamed except for TALLAL!!


we all laughed  at him


Sadeem: haa ajal dla3 she laughed


we laughed our ass off !!!


Then sadeem peed on her self from all the laughing 


wow what a lovely night !!!


i loveee them when the movie waas over we played truth and dare 


Then Sadeem deared tallal to Dance belly dancing 


then he started dancing hilarious!!!!!

They all got their phones put and took pictures of him!!

They all putteed it as a dp!!!!

hahahahaha 

Tallal: yaa zgaan sheeloohaa wallah la awreekm tshoofeen ya sadeem he smiled a devilish smile

The night was amazing 

i tweeted 

" such an amazing night with 
@ahmadalx
@tallalalx
@Manalalx 
@sadeemalx & @Raneemalx


@ghadahalx @alyaalx 
@abeeralx @Sultanax
 and @anoudalx


i lovee you Guys so much!!!


they all retweeted it


they all slept it was only manal and me who stayed awake

beside i promised her to make it up  to her


i got down to the kitchen 


pinged manal and pinged tallal


manal-.:ha ?

Tala : t3ali t7t elm6b5

tallal's chat :

Tallal: n3m yalbthra abi anam

Tala: t3al enzl t7t elm6b5 '9roori abeek

Tallal: uff lazem ?

Tala : ee bsr3a

then manal came with her messy hair

Manal: ha shtbeen?

me: e9bri shway 

i acted like i was busy with my phone

then tallal came with his messy hair and puffy eyes
 while rubbing his eyes

he didn't notice that manal was here!

Tallal: haa shtbeen

manal was just staring

Tallal: manal? he said and he smiled 

i got talla's hand and got manal's hand

me: im sorry for what i did i was wrong you guys love eachother i shouldn't ruin it im sorry 

then i got manal's hand with tallal's hand and said 


Me: im sorry guys sam7ooni 

i left those love birds alone 

staring at eachother's eyes !

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5 comments:

  1. Cute yiyanoon wallah!
    I love this post <3!

    Keep it up bs can u add romance between tala & Ahmad please ;(?

    From your reader M!

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  2. thank you M !

    I Will enshallah!

    your not just a reader but your a lovely reader indeed Thanks again for commenting <3!

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  3. i love this post !

    i have to admit it krht tala in the last chapter!

    add more action between sara and tala !

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    1. Aww Thank you !

      Nobody is perfect everyone has mistakes right!

      even in stories !

      okay i will !

      Thank you again for commenting !

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